Across the window
After crossing the parking lane
And the blue water swimming pool
Around the green trees lays the raised glory of earth
Mountain.
Close to where horzion is laying
Close to where clouds are forming
Close to where breeze is blowing
Close to where sun is warming
And beyond those
Misting mountains
Turbulent seas
Deep hights
Dark Nights
Thoughts of past
Troubles of present
Hopes of Future
And Pristine beauty of ages
Sleeps.
I sit and think of those moments.....
Sitting at stairs
Looking towards the meadow
With the fountain flowing around
Morning is reaching
Great are those...
who will come now...
from left
from right
from east
and from west
and all the directions
To attend the classes
sometimes to go to nescafe
sometimes to go to chatter at winty
sometimes to the reading room
sometimes to library
sometimes to party
sometimes to rock
sometimes to d&d
sometimes to play
sometimes to edlc
sometimes to quizzin
sometimes to rendezvous
sometimes to tryst
sometimes to biohoriozon
sometimes to chemcon
And then they will go
sometimes to glory
sometimes to history
sometimes to future
And they will remain
close...
close to me
They are my friends!!!
14 comments:
I can only appreciate the content, the form of poetry is best left to dido.
I too agree... Nescafe, HFC, Roti and Mutter Paneer... I exist in the knowledge that I have turned by back on perhaps the best and happiest place I have ever been in... but life goes on.
But I count you blessed, Gimli son of Gloin: for your loss you suffer of your own free will, and you might have chosen otherwise... and the least reward that you shall have is that the memory of Lothlorien shall remain ever clear and unstained in your heart, and shall neither fade nor grow stale.
(The fellowship of the ring, lord of the rings)
hmmmm sirji i shud say u are to vela to think of all this!!! yahan to time hi nahin milta yeh sab sochne ka [:P]
and raghav har jagah lotr mat ghusaya kar?? was that copy pasted or from memories??
I agree wid vicksy..but still d piece is really nice!!:) aur raghav se mat padvaya karo ye sab..art nd poetry r beyond his comprehension..he is only a scholarly critic..esp. of d lang. u use..rite raghav??:d
@vicksy
I remembered the first line, the second was copy pasted
swimming pool, huh?? ;)
haha i never saw anyone jumping into the pool though :P may be its just just for aesthetic reasons :D
reminiscent of gud old days!! wish dey cud return!! u surely miss dem bad!!! its a difference of culture! n lack of indians! but surely those days were glorious...missing all de gud stuff
using all natural extremes is GOOD.
I think, or again,i interpret it as, giving GODly status to friends.
@rk
ya to me...
friends are breath of life.
Excellent Poetry I chanced to read!! Keep it up.
Sweet!I kept thinking maybe you were describing nature and the colours of the sunrise--"friends' came as a surprise!
Even though i don't know what d&d and edlc mean (am presuming its some IIT-D lingo) i enjoyed the poem and the sentiments expressed.
really nice comment...thanks..
d&d ...dance and dramatics;
edlc...English debating and literary club
rendezvous, tryst, biohoriozon, chemcon....iit festival and events.
:) 詩が良かったよ。
頭がいいから勉強したら日本語でも詩を書けると思う。
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